Feedback sheets from the pitch

These are the feedback sheets which we received from our class members and teacher. As a group we was very pleased with the feedback because as you can see we received 3* star ratings across the board which shows that our pitch was seen as impressive and was well thought out which led to it getting good recognition. The feedback is pretty similar all stating that they liked our additional video explaining each shot which is going to feature in our video in beat and time with the song , they stated that this helped them get a better understanding of our video idea. The members also stated that our song choice was strong and fitted well with the fighting scene that we have decided to feature in our music video. Another positive factor we received was that we had really researched into this chosen genre and new our stuff about the image of the band. I can agree with this because as this wasn't our strongest genre we did have to do lots of research to make sure that we was on the right tracks therefore by the class recognising that has showed that our research had payed off.

We did also receive some feedback on what needs improving such as relating more to Goodwins theory , we did think that we was lacking some references to goodwins therefore can only agree with that statement however we will try our best now to try and use as much of Goodwins theory as possible when filming our music video. We was also questioned about our logo due to it having the fists behind bars people said that they could relate it more to a gangster/rap genre which again is justifiable therefore we are in the process of thinking of new ideas for a logo. We was thinking of something a lot more simple maybe just involving text.

For the last box which states 'Things that don't work' we received no comments which is always a positive because it means that all of the ideas that we had came up were all relevant and were all liked by the class members who were giving us feedback.

Overall we are all very satisfied with the feedback we received because on the whole it was all very positive and encouraging. We do feel that we could definitely apply some changes such as the logo which will only make our idea stronger therefore it is in our best interest to do this. The feedback has also helped us feel a lot more confident about our ideas and has shown that the work that we had put in to come up with the specific ideas had payed off because they were seen as very positive by the group.